a barren and harnessed beauty,
like a Jehovah maven off from duty,
cedes my bid, has basket thirsty,
needs a day bright, just as inverse to sooty
there she's lost, there she's found,
is devising smiles, or healing the wounds?
reflection of the earth, on water drop lucid,
mums the real-self, those mysterious sounds.
Break the hype, want to shine,
where it started, lets together rewind.
Supplement the spreads, it's all give and take.
Moor is eternal, beyond ceremonious sets of mind







12 comment(s):
So the spectator speaks after a long wait...nevertheless, worth the wait!!!
An exotic orchestration of allegory and simile; a striking depiction of the character that stands bright yet mysterious. Though I think the title "Reminicence" doesn't champion the lyrics...but you may have had your reasons to choose it.
December 7, 2010 1:12 PM
@Anonymous: You got the character right. Allegory however, carries a huge eternal epic. And yes, about the title, well. It's always better to have some identity than staying anonymous :)
December 7, 2010 1:19 PM
look.. it is gud read... but I lost the meaning cause of the big/huge/massive/heavy words.
sorry... but you used to be fun.
January 23, 2011 2:14 PM
@NAcheese: Oh yes, i get the point that it is hard to get the point through such heavy words... will try to balance from now on :)
January 24, 2011 11:21 AM
Hi, cool post. I have been thinking about this topic,so thanks for sharing. I will probably be subscribing to your blog. Keep up great writing!!!
April 2, 2011 10:02 PM
hey where have u lost!!! so long waiting fr a post from ya!!
April 17, 2011 9:35 PM
was away from blogging for a while. will be back soon :)
April 18, 2011 10:41 AM
thanks for sharing.
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May 26, 2011 2:59 PM
hey darshak u wre gonna be back? what happened?? busy bee. :)
June 19, 2011 10:33 PM
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Thanks for this post its really interesting i bookmark your blog for future stuff like this..
August 12, 2011 12:39 PM
You asked me if I have stopped blogging and have disappeared yourself? Nice post, this one :)
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October 2, 2011 2:15 PM
@canary: yep. have pretty much abandoned the activity these days :( partly have moved to facebook for writing.
October 11, 2011 11:27 AM
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